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Drowning by ~tomfromhell:icontomfromhell:

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i went out and found myself
now i wish i was someone else
because all you got to see
was the fucked up side of me
that i tried to keep
caged inside of me, so deep
this is what it looks like
when i pretend im not in pain
and this is what it looks like
when i throw myself away
but im gonna keep holding on
im gonna keep being wrong
im gonna keep running away
because everyone let me down
and everyone watched me drown
i went out and found myself
now i wish i was someone else
because all you got to see
was the fucked up side of me
and it kills me
to see you cry
the sadness shining in your eye
and theres no reason to keep living a lie
you can run away
try to find a safe place
where you can hide
and watch me get pulled away in the tide
because this is what it looks like
when i pretend im not in pain
and this is what it looks like
when i throw myself away
but im gonna keep holding on
im gonna keep being wrong
im gonna keep running away
because everyone let me down
and everyone watched me drown
©2007-2009 ~tomfromhell
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i like it, sry bout the repeting lines, but it dosent flow right unless i write it as it would be sang
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~tasteofinsanity:icontasteofinsanity: Dec 13, 2007, 4:17:25 PM
no no, the repetition emphasizes what you're saying.
its obvious its in a lyrical song format.

this really reverberates, with how ive felt throughout this year.

talent much? lolol

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these paper trails, they come back round. to cut me down, again.
-OH THE MIRTH-
~Pythongurl:iconPythongurl: Dec 13, 2007, 11:07:24 PM
Wow. Its really good!

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I didn't give up on love, love gave up on me

Go here! Join! And be sure to reference me! Please *Puppy dog eyes* *RawEm0tion
~tomfromhell:icontomfromhell: Dec 14, 2007, 9:36:44 AM
=D :hug: thanx

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Karenaide Ichirin No Hana

DO NOT CROSS
PROSECUTORS WILL BE VIOLATED
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~tomfromhell:icontomfromhell: Dec 14, 2007, 9:38:34 AM
=D thanx, should i put the others in a lyrical format?

--
Karenaide Ichirin No Hana

DO NOT CROSS
PROSECUTORS WILL BE VIOLATED
[link]
~Iruka6:iconIruka6: Dec 14, 2007, 11:07:43 AM
:clap: :worship: You shall be praised! :worship: :clap:
for great literature :D

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Normally, people don't change unless
they drink the blood of a Black Blood
but they can change people into vampires
merely by sucking their Blood, and they can
even change other Black Blood's into their lineage.
This is the Koowlon Children
~tasteofinsanity:icontasteofinsanity: Dec 14, 2007, 6:59:43 PM
its up to you and how you wish to play with the words :]

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these paper trails, they come back round. to cut me down, again.
-OH THE MIRTH-
~tomfromhell:icontomfromhell: Dec 16, 2007, 10:31:09 AM
ok =D

--
Karenaide Ichirin No Hana

DO NOT CROSS
PROSECUTORS WILL BE VIOLATED
[link]
~tomfromhell:icontomfromhell: Dec 16, 2007, 10:33:36 AM
:bow: its my calling :hug:

--
Karenaide Ichirin No Hana

DO NOT CROSS
PROSECUTORS WILL BE VIOLATED
[link]
~Iruka6:iconIruka6: Dec 17, 2007, 9:33:32 AM
yeah:D :clap:

--
Normally, people don't change unless
they drink the blood of a Black Blood
but they can change people into vampires
merely by sucking their Blood, and they can
even change other Black Blood's into their lineage.
This is the Koowlon Children
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