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dont tell me what to do
dont tell me your lies are true
the thought of you chills me to the bone
id rather stay away
id rather be alone
a rose by any other name might smell as sweet
but a rose by your name smells like betreyal, and deceit
i stayed at the cross roads of this path
the right side was love
the left side was wrath
either way, i would have cried
or kept my tears locked up inside
when you were angry,
i was the one with the scar
no mattter how much i ran
i never got too far
i know i left you broken inside
we can play that game
ill run
you hide
im getting off this ride
when it started out it was fun
now its over, im done
i cant write my thoughts when theres nothing left to think
ill stop wasting my pen
because your worth less than the ink
©2007-2009 ~tomfromhell
:icontomfromhell:

Author's Comments

, i was savin this for vday but i decided not to cuz i got 2 vday based poems, the other i sjust called "Valentine's Day" and i will save it 4 vday

to play it on a guitar go here [link]

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:iconbabyphire:
shocking... yet amazing.
Makes me go "Hell Yea!"

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"Not even Death can save you from me!" said the big ugly red thing.
:icontomfromhell:
:shithitsthefan: :#1: :w00t: HELL YEA!

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Karenaide Ichirin No Hana

DO NOT CROSS
PROSICUTORS WILL BE VIOLATED
[link]
:iconflynn01:
kool.... who is she tom?

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Alright you primitive screwheads, listen up. See this? This is my boomstick! It's a twelve gauge double barreled Remington, S-Mart's top-of-the-line. That's right. Shop Smart. Shop S-mart.
-Ash Army of Darkness
:iconsweetlepakko:
Wow...excellent work...favs=) You are a good writer!

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'I unlit the light to embrace the dark'


Cogito, ergo, sum.
:icontomfromhell:
=D thanx :hug:

--
Karenaide Ichirin No Hana

DO NOT CROSS
PROSICUTORS WILL BE VIOLATED
[link]
:icontomfromhell:
ill send ya a note, idun think u know her anyway

--
Karenaide Ichirin No Hana

DO NOT CROSS
PROSICUTORS WILL BE VIOLATED
[link]
:iconiruka6:
Amazing!! :worship: you out did yourself on this one :D :clap:
this reminds me of someone ;p

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Normally, people don't change unless
they drink the blood of a Black Blood
but they can change people into vampires
merely by sucking their Blood, and they can
even change other Black Blood's into their lineage.
Then this will mean Destruction.
:icontomfromhell:
:bow: thanx :hug: i did,didnt i?

--
Karenaide Ichirin No Hana

DO NOT CROSS
PROSICUTORS WILL BE VIOLATED
[link]
:iconiruka6:
yes you did :giggle: and your welcome ;p

--
Normally, people don't change unless
they drink the blood of a Black Blood
but they can change people into vampires
merely by sucking their Blood, and they can
even change other Black Blood's into their lineage.
Then this will mean Destruction.

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