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Poison -Rewrite- by ~tomfromhell:icontomfromhell:



i dont need you
and i dont want you
anywhere in my life
youre a liar
a deciever
poisoning what i was
i laugh when you cry
youll fail when you try
ill laugh when everything falls apart on you
youre the liar
the deciever
you poisoned what i was
youre the traitor
the double crosser
i dont wanna hear you say youre sorry
you covered my eyes
and fed me your lies
thought i was blind
poisoned my mind
dont pick me up when i fall
because i know youll just drop me again
now your perfect world
is coming to an end
i would have helped you
if you were my friend
i think its your turn
to crash and burn
ill watch as your world dies
from the poison that blinded your eyes
©2008 ~tomfromhell
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rewrote it, i loved the idea but didnt really like the flow of the original, and my band is gonna play this one, sounds ridiculusly badass too

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~Iruka6:iconIruka6: 2 minutes 8 seconds ago
very cool and very well said :clap: :worship:

--
They are better than Human Beings because
they Know but do not tell.
A Dog is like an Eternal Peter Pan,
a Child who never grows Old and Who
Therefore is always available to LOVE and be Loved.
Dont keep him on a leash if you Want him attached to you